2008-03-17 Catalyst: Also good.The last verse reminds me of lyrics from a song 2008-03-17 AuroraLumos: really?! lol not intended honestly XD 2008-06-02 Eyudo: sounds like brak up on your mistake kinda of theme...right? riminds me of a reoocuring dream someone could have...its good though..and you said you couldnt rhyme XD[AuroraLumos]: 733.The End of the Line
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The end of the line
I could wait no more
He said it was fine
But I knew before
I grasped his hand
And we kissed goodbye
Another new land
I’m ready to try
The train left on time
This made a change
I tried not to cry
But the tears still came
I was jolted awake
The end of the line
I made a mistake
I knew not the time
It’s the end of the line
The end of the line
The end of the line
The end of my time